Thursday, March 15, 2012

To My Brother... Comments

Rating: 4.5

You are alone right now and feel the pain in heart
Because of broken hopes and false pretense.
Your face is smiling but you crying start
And try to understand of fortune dance.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Full Moon 19 September 2012

towards simplicities through complexities!

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Danny Draper 28 March 2012

A nice personal poem of love and guidance for your brother at his time of grief. He must be stronger for your care.

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Macharia Kanyari 25 March 2012

I hope your brother read this... He should be proud

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Walterrean Salley 18 March 2012

Strong bond. Advice that only a sister could give. How wonderful, Ekaterina.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 March 2012

Great poem sister, your brother should be proud of you.

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Harindhar Reddy 18 March 2012

Very sensitive poem, it touched my heart and hope it can walk straight in the hearts people. Yes sometimes people will leave us in love but need to look beyond sorrow and wait for someone else who can match our thoughts. A well written poem by Kate! Truesome and awesome!

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Wahab Abdul 17 March 2012

''We can just die and lye under the ground If I lose husband or you lose your wife.'' when i read this poem i become soft...and fears engulfed , as the bad things are waiting for me, i should more courageous to live in this world................................

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Hans Vr 17 March 2012

What a wonderful sister. Your brother is bery lucky to have you as his sister!

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