To My Astrological Wife Comments

every woman hungers to be called 'a goddess roaming wildly' through someone's imagination. Great imagery!

Uriah...this is a very good poem. I wish I had written it. I have one suggestion: the lines, 'new dimensions of happiness and laughter' could be more imaginative, more sensual. Words like 'ecstasy' and 'joyous oblivion' come to mind. I'm saving 'shivery pleasure' for my own poem. John Kay

'In a bed of healing sunlight'................that is beautiful. I really loved that line. Beautiful poem Uriah. (As usual!) :) Sincerely, Mary

oh my so romantic....As I said before you are great!