Wednesday, January 9, 2008

To Much Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

With the evacuation of darkness
Comes the lovely sunrays
Creeping slow like fierce beast
Devouring shadows last night left
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Marieta Maglas 19 April 2010

very smartly written with selective words Mayette

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Ewigi Liebe 09 January 2008

very beautiful and bring me a summer smile although its to cold in here...love this verse the most shadow last nite left and hot summer, .......well, hope is not that to hot during my vacation this coming april...

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Francesca Johnson 09 January 2008

I have enjoyed reading this because of the original phrases it contains. Phrases such as 'the fierce beast devouring shadows last night left' and 'hot summer, frigid winter, what marriage they may bring.' A colourful poem, full of pictures. Love, Fran xx

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