To Move Along Comments

Vague story but still makes for great imagery! jennifer marie poling13 minutes ago I love the words you use, it describes your thoughts very well and i feel a connection. I like how it wasn't cut and dry and I love how you don't use any punctuation, I think it adds to the artistry.

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touching Tami Rusconi7 minutes ago simple and sweet. A story of youthful love. Innocent and well written. I like it Comment 0

Great story and imagery jennifer marie poling10 minutes ago The story was pretty vague but I loved the words you used and it still gave great imagery. I like that you didn't use any punctuation, I think that adds to the artistry. Cool rhythms and fun to read! Comment +1

word is full of relation, thanks sir.

I used to remember as a poor boy The dream was to have good toys