Sunday, May 8, 2016
To Mother From Exiled Son (Tanka) Comments
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Old moon far away
In a boundless universe
A mother's love:
A dot for a satellite
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7/28/2025 11:57:45 PM # 1.0.0
dear Udaya, may I suggest a variation? '' Old moon far away In a boundless universe A mother's love: A dot for a satellite Her exiled son won't be lost ''
why not, beautiful.. Seriously thanks for your editing and guide. I will include the new version
my pleasure - really glad you like the variation