To Moon Comments

I always enjoy poems about the moon. Thanks!

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful poem elegantly brought forth in heightened poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

Moon played the strings mellow yet deceiving As jackals’ lingered for a big gorge at herald’s wave. such a fine poem...... use of words is powerful and images used are telling...... just fine. thank you very much. tony

It is such a beautiful poem.. The inagery is exquisite.. I wish you were still active at PH. If you ever see this then thanks for sharing.

interesting....fine poetic stanzas..nice poem....10

There is a sense of mystique in this poem 1. Moon conceding one fray to win another....renouncing to dawn... 2. Shadows hiding behind wood keens....swirling pools is a lovely phrase... 4 jackals and the fly trap of venus on ground.... Its a nice swirling poem as a sweet poetess.....

a wonderful poem abeauty in the flow...lovely to read

It is an imaginative way of putting it poetically. An elegant poem.

The moon renounced to dawn and vanish its waning shine. She conceded one fray to lose, to win anoth....................yes shat an imaginationto express for love and its depthcanbefelt by genuine heart only and poetess heart is full of love. it is felt evenat distance....lovely poem with heart felt warmth.....10 read mine pledge...should we die

As always you created again another unique piece. It has a wonderful imagery and well chosen words. Great! best regards, joan

Interesting piece of work. enjoyed reading it!

aonderful and imaginative poem.good imagery.nice poem dear cat voted10 surya

Pool within pool, snare within snare, a quick mud Beyond the desire touch, haaaa. shan

Beautiful landscape of moonlight.........soft sweet and serene

beautiful liens, well done

As for me, it signifies expression of a dying love seeking another chance but fell to another failure when the other prospect turned out to be no better than the first. Thanks for sharing.

Hello Ma'am.. After a long time, I read a poem of yours.. I mean kinda had a time off from PH, .., And you know what without poetry life becomes that much more tough! ! ! Ahh as for this poem, I should say, this is a very good poem. I love the language you used here, and also the imagery. As always, you do entrap the reader in a nice verbal art..10++ With Love Shan

Lovely imagery marks this beautifully lyrical piece.

Very lyrical nice read great imagery

Very beautiful imagery......penned down feeding my mind coolant