To Meet Again Comments

Dear Nate, Your poem reflects intense feeling and the way you jot down your worlds through nature's preposition, make it even great. Pictures resonate of a night such as this when clouds lay low My jacket across your shoulders and your hand clasped round mine Above two are my Favourite lines.

Nice poem Alexis, well written and it Is good to let the reader interpret their own meaning.

Thanks Robin, I did think that myself I just wanted to leave it vague so the reader could interpret it either way. You're comment is appreciated I will try to make my next one clearer!

Hi Alexis, The poem itself is quite good. Your formatting at word choices work well. The only thing I am missing is, are you writing of a dream, or was this person taken from you. That point is not clear and just a tiny bit confusing to the overall story telling. Other than that, you are off to a great start! -Robin xoxo