Thursday, November 11, 2021

To Me, This Life Looks Like ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say ~ life is beautiful
And I say it disguises like a mirage
No less than a spider's web
It spreads desires of our body
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M. Asim Nehal
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me poet yeps poet 12 November 2021

Pure like honey, odorless like olive oil, Fresh like ice and innocent as a dove. See poetry and life depend on who said what I always say forget soul be sole make a pirposeless life whole dig not for it holes

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2021

To my Poem List with top, top stars. So beautifully penned. Loved the metaphors and allegories.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2021

A brilliant poem Dr. Asim ji. Profound, insightful and philosophical.

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Mamta S 11 November 2021

Insightful poem with great depth, impeccable flow of words makes it more special.

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2021

A wonderful poem full of transmittable ideas of depth and beauty, Poetic and individual philosophy at its best, A magnificent work, deeply forgettable!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2021

Brilliantly written especially the last line Bravo!

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Zumas Millamo 11 November 2021

They say ~ life is wonderful And I say how I wonder what it is A soul inside the body playing tug of war Both are competing for a win-win situation.

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 November 2021

Life is worth living and enjoying. I believe in lively life.

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Deepak S S 11 November 2021

Great similes to sum-up life. Adorable 5 **

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Gordon Walter 11 November 2021

Life is larger than our wishes.

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