Sunday, November 2, 2014

To Me, My Love....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

To me, my love, never been ruled,
With dusty stars, in I despair,
Bringing me to days; unfair,
Where help's never helped, with when love is glued.
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Heather Wilkins 05 November 2014

a good poem on love well expressed keep writing dear poet freind

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Bernard Snyder 05 November 2014

Great poem! I love this one a lot, Saheb. Quite impressive. Well-deserved 10' from me! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2014

Nice work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Neela Nath Das 04 November 2014

Yes, you're right.Love knows to forgive the betrayer.A true lover never takes revenge.Great!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2014

An impressive poem........................10

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem on love. Beautify imagery of words used with seasons of nature. I loved the lines... To me, my love, not a vindictive man's historical revenge, Shall never alter when to it death's door cage. Loved reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 November 2014

nice work, young poet. kudos for that.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 November 2014

So nicely crafted with loving, charming words........wonderful poem on feelings of love.....top marks

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

beautiful poem on love....nice......

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 November 2014

nice poem on love so nice- your words-To me, my love, not a vindictive man's historical revenge, Shall never alter when to it death's door cage. keep it up

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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