Marion! why that pensive brow?
What disgust to life hast thou?
Change that discontented air;
Frowns become not one so fair.
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The classic concept fits this poem well and your choice of words shows you are a skilled poet
But wouldst thou see the secret chain Which binds us in your humble train, To hail you queens of all creation, Know, in a word, 'tis ANIMATION concerning woman's soft dominion. tony