Wednesday, July 29, 2009

To March On Evergreen Comments

Rating: 2.7

Shape our dreams to march on evergreen;
make it all seasons of spring.
Make it flutter on sun’s eventide
with strong shoulder blade to glide.
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Catrina Heart
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 October 2009

ina commanding tone. well shan

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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

Poetically painted beautifully across the screen Good job little lady.....

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Kesav Easwaran 10 October 2009

good work Cathy...lot of imagination pouring out there... it should have been 'let them' instead of 'let it' in the lines there...thanks

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Rakesh Bedi 29 July 2009

A lovely poem on dreams, catrina!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 29 July 2009

very beautiful piece this one..........congratulation

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