Friday, October 18, 2013

To Make The Pieces All Fit In Comments

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Dawn's a single mother, with struggles, now her own
It's been five long years of widow' s work
To mend her broken home
A chore, to stretch her monthly budget,
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Susan Lacovara
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A rich resolution that is so refreshing! Well done my friend!

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Your words remind me of something I once heard someone say... That if we could all throw the full contents of our worries and troubles into one huge pile so that everyone could see them... we would want ours back... VERY well penned dear poet.

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Danny Draper 22 October 2013

Great snap shots of different struggles which all people have, some greater some smaller, and yet we cope and with some resilience manage to go on and each day piece it all together. Thank you for this poem.

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John Mccullagh 19 October 2013

Excellent and sadly very topical.

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