Thursday, May 22, 2014

To Make A Source Of Light Comments

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The unlimited sky is open
With unlimited resources
Above my eyes
To fly and only to fly.
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TADASHA TRIPATHY
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Yash Shinde 28 May 2014

light and darkness are inseparable! Its our choice to choose between the two.........great poem......Kudos!

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Colleen Courtney 25 May 2014

Hmmm....which side will eventually draw you in? The evil of darkness or the goodness of light? Great poem!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 May 2014

Hello poet Tadasha, an interesting take on Light and thought, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Valsa George 23 May 2014

Yes, it is upto each one of us to decide whether one should follow the path of light or the dungeon of darkness, for light and darkness co exist.! Enjoyed your poem, Tadasha

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Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2014

very fine, I like it, source of light.

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