Saturday, September 7, 2013

To Love You Comments

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To love you is my pleasure
To search you is my peace

My life is not a waste
I am in meditative state
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kalpana shah
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Chinedu Dike 05 June 2018

Witty train of thoughts well articulated, and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kalpana.

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Marcus Mckinley 01 October 2013

this is a very positive and uplifting poem. well done.

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Salvatore Fittipaldi 21 September 2013

I also would like to find this inner peace! !

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C. P. Sharma 19 September 2013

Simple yet unfathomable depth in it. But I would say, I can see the divinity in you, so I love you for ever.

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Unwritten Soul 10 September 2013

I cannot disagree with each lines, if i do that its like i denying the truth :) ..liked it :) _Soul

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