Friday, July 13, 2012

To Love Just Once Comments

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Take it away
that steel moulded thing
shining for this heart
like a trickster you sing
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Simon Collins
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Malini Kadir 30 July 2012

Wow! breath taking! beautiful thought............to leave fear to hold your deep trust near you only know this makes me real so you will notice the light that merges when I ask to be your breath between my birth and glorious death Simon Collins

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Valerie Dohren 13 July 2012

Lovely romantic poem - great write, love the closing lines.

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Varna Soyokaze 13 July 2012

True, Love always comes to rescue. Your rhymes are amazing. Dont know why, But when I read this poem I felt awesome.

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