Friday, September 25, 2015

To Love A_Rose; My Love Arose. Comments

Rating: 4.9

An Angel, so lovely; my lover, a rose
Captured me with caring am loving her charm
So gorgeous to look at her picture, her pose
The type that kills anger and then keeps you calm
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Thomas Henk
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Hazel Durham 29 March 2017

Love oozes from every line you write from the heart with such deep emotions that is so moving, very well written!

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Chinedu Dike 01 October 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. I like the romantic nature of the piece and its rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Albert. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Heartfelt and romantic, trying to stay true to just one woman, doing everything possible to not think of other women, wanting only the one! Very commendable sentiments, Albert! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Albert Aguda 26 September 2015

Thank you Mr. Kelly. This is actually my first poem on this site.

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Ovi Odiete 25 September 2015

Beautiful and Vivid Imagery with rhythmic Rhymes.

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Kelly Kurt 25 September 2015

A very lovely poem, Albert. Thanks

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