Sunday, October 18, 2015

To Love A Pear Tree Comments

Rating: 4.5

My first taste of love

Was a kiss ‘neath an old pear tree
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Cherie Mort
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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2015

Welcome to PoemHunter.com! I loved reading your first poem posted on this site, it's beautiful! Loved the metaphors and the fluency of expression. A good work from a 15 year old, well done!

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Fabrizio Frosini 19 October 2015

'' I decided to never again plant another pear tree '' nice metaphors, Cherie.. but we should always plant new trees.. if not pear-tree.. try cherry or - why not - a giant sequoia.. ;) Thanks for sharing.. this is your 1st poem here.. - and a good one, indeed - .. WELCOME! and keep on writing and posting!

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Cherie Mort 19 October 2015

Thank you very much Fabrizio! as a matter of fact, this poem was one that I had written for a class assignment on the book Their Eyes Were Watching God. still, I am glad you enjoyed it. :) I hope to add many more poems in the future. Thank you again!

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