Gone away out of my world
This star once shown so bright
Flickering now will it fade way
Only time knows for alone we sit
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Is it not 'This star once shone so bright'. A very good expression of disappointment. Such release from emotion gives chance to start fresh. Nice poem.
to think of losing her is so painful isnt it? ! you express emotion so well... i really enjoyed reading all of ur poems. especially because ive finally come across something that i can relate to. :) thanks