Saturday, August 15, 2009

To Lose You... Comments

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Gone away out of my world
This star once shown so bright
Flickering now will it fade way
Only time knows for alone we sit
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Jasmine Wayne
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MuSiC HeaD 17 August 2009

to think of losing her is so painful isnt it? ! you express emotion so well... i really enjoyed reading all of ur poems. especially because ive finally come across something that i can relate to. :) thanks

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 16 August 2009

Is it not 'This star once shone so bright'. A very good expression of disappointment. Such release from emotion gives chance to start fresh. Nice poem.

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