To Look Ahead Comments
I love to sing
For self and children to bring
About the future to be bright
With more struggle and fight
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not bad Kat Challis7 hours ago 1st stanza doesn't really belong- it's distracting the last stanza: Promises in mind to look (ahead) and lead ahead is not necessary to get your point through. Keep writing
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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about a minute ago · Unlike · 1