Dew nuzzles on the petal of a delicate flower
like my dreams hanging on glistening new hopes.
Giving birth to umpteen imaginations,
like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles.
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I am deeply impressed by your inimitable style and beautiful portrayal of nature with full flow of its energy to enrich the life of those who experience the aura all around. Thank you, Asim ji. imaginations.... like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles. By filling music of life in my soul to cherish forever Finally, under the splendor of the starlit sky bare feet I wish to dance on the shifting sand dunes... alone with the nature
Imagination taking a headlong flight! I enjoyed the delightful journey of the little flower over the waves of the river, descending down from the hills and flowing through valleys and dales with music filled in the soul and its enchanting dance! Lovely write Asim!
A nice description of nature, an amazing poem..............................10
Wonderful imagery. An excellent poem having brilliant phraseology. Thrilling expression about nature. Thanks for sharing. .....10
An awesome poem on the dependence of human mind over nature... full of marvellous imageries.. you have created fantastic phrases like twilight rain, solid moonbeams.. loved it very much.....10+
Yes sometimes things are such that one should live their life to the full as they wished to write. Beautifully penned sir.