Thursday, September 3, 2015

To Live Life Fully Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dew nuzzles on the petal of a delicate flower
like my dreams hanging on glistening new hopes.
Giving birth to umpteen imaginations,
like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 14 January 2021

Yes sometimes things are such that one should live their life to the full as they wished to write. Beautifully penned sir.

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Glorious piece.....like it.

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Rajnish Manga 13 October 2016

I am deeply impressed by your inimitable style and beautiful portrayal of nature with full flow of its energy to enrich the life of those who experience the aura all around. Thank you, Asim ji. imaginations.... like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles. By filling music of life in my soul to cherish forever Finally, under the splendor of the starlit sky bare feet I wish to dance on the shifting sand dunes... alone with the nature

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Valsa George 14 September 2015

Imagination taking a headlong flight! I enjoyed the delightful journey of the little flower over the waves of the river, descending down from the hills and flowing through valleys and dales with music filled in the soul and its enchanting dance! Lovely write Asim!

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thanks much Madam Valsa.....I appreciate your comments.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2015

A nice description of nature, an amazing poem..............................10

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thank u so much Mr. Jawad.

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T Rajan Evol 03 September 2015

Outstanding poem, Great imagery, flow and message.

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thanks much Mr. T Rajan.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2015

Wonderful imagery. An excellent poem having brilliant phraseology. Thrilling expression about nature. Thanks for sharing. .....10

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2015

Thank you so much for kind words of appreciation....

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Sanjukta Nag 03 September 2015

An awesome poem on the dependence of human mind over nature... full of marvellous imageries.. you have created fantastic phrases like twilight rain, solid moonbeams.. loved it very much.....10+

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2015

I m happy that u liked it....Thanks much, SN.....

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Gajanan Mishra 03 September 2015

Really empty space is there with us always..

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2015

Thank you.

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