To Live In The Moment Comments

To feel the rays of the sun caress tired flesh attaining inner happiness regardless of circumstance showing acts of kindness each day without reward

Thank you for your constructive criticism, I will take your points on board. Blessings :)

i read the poem to know the way to live the moment to make it my life-style but i found the poem is weak.not enough to face the life difficulties (you said..attaining inner happiness REGARDLESS the circumstance) i see ignorance to the circumstance is not positive a thought. and when you want to be kind you chose the word (showing) . marks +7... keep going forward and fix the little mistakes :)