To Live In Pencil Lines Comments

I agree with you Olabode, with the content of your message I mean: one of the best of yours that I have read. You have a deeply unusual, pensive approach - and a way with words to boot. t x

I have never even thought of a poem like this one before or even read one like this sort. It was very creative to tell you the truth. I think I shall remember it for a long time.

Welldone Olabode, masterly touch, congratulations!

I have never thought of my life in line drawings, but it is a great thought. I like the way you have constructed this poem, and yes, I wish we could rub out somethings in our lives which weren't exactly perfect. Thanks for making me think afresh. Good write. love Ernestine XXX