Friday, December 27, 2013

To Live In Lent Amidst Plenty Comments

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O to live life of a modest man,
Hope in heart, wish horses on tight leash,
Happy in heavenly little niche,
Wanting less, living full, life Spartan,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2019

A brilliant poem on life has been astutely delineated. It is better to have the poet's note here.. Thank you for using nine syllabic anapaest meter.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 September 2019

I am amazed to see that you take trouble to go thru such details, dear KM. Thanks for reading and liking the poem.

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