Saturday, November 8, 2008

To Little To Late* Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your vicious conning words
Still again whittle your way in
Their deaf ears unable to hear
The betrayal call you scream in their faces
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Saint Cynosure 20 November 2008

So many times its to little, but it is really ever to late?

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 12 November 2008

POWERFUL WORDS WEAVED WITH PERFECTION... A 10+++

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Stacey Watts 10 November 2008

Oh wow this is a poem that has rang true in my life so many times. My own brother is in prison. Everytime he is in the picture there are empty promises and things of that nature. My parents seem to fall for it everytime. Ok gone on long enough I am just going to say this poem is brilliant. Save it for her may be it will help someday.

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