Saturday, August 29, 2020

To Listen To My Complete Love Story(Ghazal English) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Neither I asked from the moon nor from the stars
But I requested Your thoughts to stay the whole night

How this darkness scares me and How the night plays its games
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zoyza Da Vinka 11 September 2020

Very well thought and written I liked it.

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T Rajan Evol 31 August 2020

English ghazal of the month. thanks for sharing it.

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Poetic Sky 30 August 2020

Yes the night sits quietly to listen, thank u poet.

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Kostas Lagos 29 August 2020

A fine ghazal my friend! Thanks for posting

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2020

Neither moon nor stars but kind love has bloomed in mind and stayed for the whole night. Out of imagination love has written new song. After evening desire to meet love glowed in amazing way that brought up light of hope. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned...10

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Rajnish Manga 29 August 2020

This is a fascinating love story which seems one-sided until we look into the images that fill the space between the poet and world around him at night. Dark night, moon and the stars appear to be conspiring 'Now even night comes and sits quietly with us / To listen to my complete love story' so much so that the 'thoughts and a burning desire to meet love' are inert, Thanks for this superb piece of writing.

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