To Linger Not… Comments

i love the way that you used deep word i like it ver much its awesome

cry for not my presence but my loose of love leaves you to the pain..... what a sweeten words that hold every feeling to say good bye..... ....i like you poem to ponder....it makes me strong.....thank you...God bless...10/10

really splendidly written.. Eyes dry prevent Ready to lie; pretend to smile; You fail to read the pains In my feel; no fault yours liked the lines very much

your right i did love it its pretty good on how you used your words it gave me a clear image

i love it your use of words create a strong image

i like it, man. the details are following emotions and human features, so it has a good connection. kudos.

'non my face reveals' an expression I struggle with, cause all I find is the face of mine in the screan throughout I read. GReat write...8

Sir, great write. Thanks for asking me to read. Every word brings emotion..Great

Yes you did Know what I was going to like... I feel related to this poem very much.. it is what I am going through right now... Thank you very much for telling me to read: D Very very nice and well written: D

ur right i do like it......wait i lied.....i loved it it was awesome.....

another beautiful poem, shows how much one can want another but at the same time when its over and time to go its easier to try to forget everything thats happened and the love that was once shared, great write

so similar.......wanting to be with some one so much it tears the, apart but when its time to let go and move on we are forced to bury that lingering sense that make them cry.....it's hard touching poem kesav i really enjoyed this one have a happy new year

y sweeten the words if they mean inseparable sadness...n the mask u put...often is too opaque even for ur dearest ones....its not their fault but the grace of ur deception...fueled by the quest to see no tear in thier eyes even if it means killing urs befor they were born...hop i got wat u intended..

hearts....are to love and be loved....dont question every beat of it, , hearts dont lie...this piece is really good..thanks for making it nice..CHEERS..

really a beautiful, great piece and it is also true in reality....eyes don't lie..(though lips maybe smiling) ......really a striking one...and quite a very inspiring piece......thanks for making this sir....

thank you for sharing... I like this poem..... Exellent!

thank you kesav saab for bringing this to my attention....it is indeed marvellously written and beutifully constructed..your attention to the detail of making it rythmically pleasing shines through without compromising the depth of its message.

I really love this poem! Thanks for your message and rating on mine. I especially love the line 'ready to lie; pretend to smile; ' really great work! Thanks for sharing. -Jools-

so so so gud....! ! ! i mean the ryhying scheme..n d harmony with words is brilliant... n d msg too... KEEP IT UP... i hav written a poem on one sided love read nd comment

a gr8 write........true to its core......eyes never lie.......dis dsnt seem true nemore.....thanx for enhancing ma restricted thts.......thanx a lot for sharing dis piece! ! !