Thursday, June 11, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Holding arms up
They snatched her last piece of clothes
With the tool that has teeth like dragon
The man was speaking all the times
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Reshma Ramesh 11 June 2009

the narration was great................well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

'His name was Lali Jan Whose body was recovered from the debris Of the lone five star hotel of the town' Wonderful composition

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Catrina Heart 11 June 2009

A fine poetic story written, sad to know the end...knowing one's death found in such circumstances....great vivid opus! 10+++

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