Sunday, October 20, 2013

To Kiss You Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have dreamt
Of a thousand different ways
To kiss you.
My lips wait in secret surrender.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Aria Siren 10 December 2013

Please forgive my abandon For this will not be rehearsed Oh how these lines captured me. Very romantic, your thoughts are going onto the page just as they appear in your head and that is an amazing thing in poetry. I loved this poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 December 2013

'I have dreamt Of a thousand different ways To kiss you.' Nice! I think most lovers do it when in love.

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Lyn Paul 09 November 2013

This is fantastic Ruby, So romantic and the want to read it slowly to capture the dream. well done

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