O come when I am sleeping
And take me to your care
For I am spent with weeping
And yearn for regions fair
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A fine verse of resignation from dispair which belies its deft and easy rhyme. Let one day a sigh be done and with it all pain ended, but until such time know you are loved and universally befriended.
Very positive poem. O, wake me with your soft touch Come, propose to me with rose Fragrant the staleness of my life Take away all woes and sorrows
Very sweet and uplifting. Joy will come in the morning and love will blossom anew. Lovely write.
Yes, Valerie, let joy come in our sleep. It often eludes us but when we see the creations in our world, the beauty of it all is sometimes overwhelming. Not easy to enjoy the beauty at all times, but most of the time it softens the sharpness of sadness. Ecellent poem
....a beautiful poem, with a poignant tone, and slow rhythm, loved this one.......u'll surely find one to comfort you....
So beautiful with great sensitivity and with the depth of your feelings delivered with such panache!
How very emotional! [Reading your poems is always a most satisfying experience.] Enjoyed it, Val.
A very very sweet poem, simple in diction and poignant in tone! I also pray.... Let your heart be enfolded in gladness! Thanks for your kind response to my poem.. Eagle on Wings!
Beautiful and another masterpiece. I can truly feel your words. Thank you...
We all yearn for peace of mind and for our cares to melt away. Beautifully expressed.
Bring forth a new tomorrow and bring back the joy. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
We wish your wish we could fulfill, We'd give you all our joy, at will. You are our Poetess, ideal, And for you All, great Love do feel. Such as beautiful and touching poem, dear Val
Hell on earth we say and joy to peace in the afterlife. Beautiful poem.