Saturday, March 22, 2014

To Joy Comments

Rating: 5.0

O come when I am sleeping
And take me to your care
For I am spent with weeping
And yearn for regions fair
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Valerie Dohren
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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 30 April 2014

Hell on earth we say and joy to peace in the afterlife. Beautiful poem.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 09 April 2014

Beautiful poem, Valerie. Thank you for it.

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

A fine verse of resignation from dispair which belies its deft and easy rhyme. Let one day a sigh be done and with it all pain ended, but until such time know you are loved and universally befriended.

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C. P. Sharma 01 April 2014

Very positive poem. O, wake me with your soft touch Come, propose to me with rose Fragrant the staleness of my life Take away all woes and sorrows

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Patricia Grantham 31 March 2014

Very sweet and uplifting. Joy will come in the morning and love will blossom anew. Lovely write.

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Hans Vr 31 March 2014

Yes, Valerie, let joy come in our sleep. It often eludes us but when we see the creations in our world, the beauty of it all is sometimes overwhelming. Not easy to enjoy the beauty at all times, but most of the time it softens the sharpness of sadness. Ecellent poem

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Yash Shinde 30 March 2014

....a beautiful poem, with a poignant tone, and slow rhythm, loved this one.......u'll surely find one to comfort you....

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Hazel Durham 29 March 2014

So beautiful with great sensitivity and with the depth of your feelings delivered with such panache!

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Om Chawla 28 March 2014

How very emotional! [Reading your poems is always a most satisfying experience.] Enjoyed it, Val.

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Valsa George 28 March 2014

A very very sweet poem, simple in diction and poignant in tone! I also pray.... Let your heart be enfolded in gladness! Thanks for your kind response to my poem.. Eagle on Wings!

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Johnny Ferrari 27 March 2014

Beautiful poem, Wisdom embedded in feeling

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Dee Corpolongo 27 March 2014

Beautiful and another masterpiece. I can truly feel your words. Thank you...

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Paul Reed 26 March 2014

We all yearn for peace of mind and for our cares to melt away. Beautifully expressed.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 March 2014

Bring forth a new tomorrow and bring back the joy. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 23 March 2014

A beautiful poem, to have the pain taken away is all we ask.

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Sandra Feldman 22 March 2014

We wish your wish we could fulfill, We'd give you all our joy, at will. You are our Poetess, ideal, And for you All, great Love do feel. Such as beautiful and touching poem, dear Val

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