To: Jim Comments

Dear Dianne. We're sure Jim read and watching you above. This experience has so much to learned about. And acceptance to grief will best fit for us to cherish memories of the ones we had lost. I missed my grandma. She did not even saw me in this world when my mom gave birth to me. I am sure she is watching over me. Well, this is life. What can we say. Just catch up and you'll be there. Something like that..

Were instead of was all the way across.

The opening line should read, you WERE a good person, do spell check too. otherwise a fairly well written poem.