Wednesday, July 8, 2009

To Innocence Comments

Rating: 3.0

I think, think and think
what I get in the end
a tray full of ash
and a room full of psychedelic smoke
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Fay Slimm 12 July 2009

This is an honest and warm wish for the beloved innocence of naivete' which we all seem to love after childhood - - and so appealing in the presentation that I am sure you will attain at least a part of that wish dear poet......10 from Fay

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