How could I conquer the loneliness of night
When every spark of burning thoughts is pain
And this heart pumped tears and not blood
Shall I keep on weeping and wait for the wound to heal
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What you say i can feel and see what you mean... to conquer the loneliness of the night is brutal and yet you make it seem like memories of love is what keeps you sane... keep up the good work.. Cuase this is a ten! !
How can I conquer the loneliness of night? Something I ask myself quite alot. That one line has still stuck in my heat from your poem. It's beautifully written, heartfelt and the words you used were beautiful. Keep writing.
I just love good poems about countries and this is one of them.
favorite line (out of many) : 'Or catch the stars and play with the night' such beautiful imagery. nice work.