Sunday, May 20, 2007

To Hold Comments

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Sometimes I want to hold you as a friend
Hold you safe and against the world defend
Sometimes to hold you in a mad love embrace
Feel you skin-on-skin.. feel our hearts race
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Zen Bojczuk
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Marci Made 25 May 2007

Had to do a re read on this.......now wondering where your heart and thoughts were when you wrote this....Why, I don't know, perhaps because it is so open, filled with a longing for? ? ? ? nosey me....It is beautiful though, makes one relate to your poem about 'did you ever wonder while reading a poem if~~~~ marci.xo

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Marci Made 20 May 2007

Whomever this is written for is one fortunate 'signigicant other.' You've said so much is succinctly.~~~~~~~~marci.m. :)

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Zen Bojczuk

Zen Bojczuk

Philadelphia, PA. USA
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