Monday, June 12, 2017

To Him. Comments

Rating: 4.8

He did all he could
To lighten the way
Which in turn
Made some to stay
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Tom Allport
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Loke Kok Yee 23 June 2017

Any one who wishes to can write volumes for or against your belief on this subject and that says a lot of the short six lines you wrote. Thank you for this profound write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2017

I eulogize your poem. Beautiful penmanship. Let the armageddon come, all wiil come to its order. Thanks...10

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Practicing Poetess 18 June 2017

Tom, this is lovely. The simplest poems are often the most profound, and have the greatest effect. Thank you so much for this!

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Valsa George 18 June 2017

By Armageddon, all will come into His fold... I hope! Yes... He does everything to lighten our load and light our paths! Short and beautiful....!

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2017

A brief and meaningful poem. Thanks

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