Sunday, February 11, 2007

To Her And Him Comments

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I remember, as a child,
She would stir our lemonade;
He would sit and tell us jokes,
Then hide our easter eggs.
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Sophia White 19 February 2007

Hey, this is a jewel among poems. The emotion is incredible - it starts sort of playfully, then erupts in a deluge of feeling. Amazing!

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Landrey 12 February 2007

strong meter. very strong emotion and mental pictures. might have been more personal with a few changes but I love it anyway. -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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