Monday, February 25, 2019

To Grow Old Together Comments

Rating: 4.9

I always hoped
to have you by my side
during the sunset of life,
when the sun
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Gianfranco Aurilio
COMMENTS
Malabika Ray Choudhury 04 March 2020

Dear Poet, every word in your poem touched my heart! Life is unpredictable, but we go on. Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POD.

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2020

Very heartfelt with strong emotions.

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jan harvey 04 March 2020

inclusive to all, swimmingly fresh!

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 March 2020

The yearning to be together when the time to leave this world is arriving is so intense here. Love for each other is deep and even death can't take it away. A very emotional poem. Liked it. 'difficulties less difficult efforts less tiring suffering more tolerable joys more intense, because I wanted to share every moment of my life with you, '.. is so nice. Congrats.

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Harley White 04 March 2020

An unexpected ending to a well written and thought out poem. I enjoyed this and the sentiment that life goes on...

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Rocky 04 March 2020

Beautiful poem . I hoped for the same sigh

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

I always hoped you would be by my side because I knew that smiling would be easier, ....../// beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 March 2020

Twice being chosen, WOW! CONGRATULATIONS being chosen for the second time as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! A well deserved accolade, great appreciations for your honest words. Melancholic words. Sad emotions from within, altogether makes this poem unforgettable. I have one too, bit ironic and with humor created and submitted in 2011. Please read " Grow Old With You? " Thank you. Best regards, Sylvia (paint too)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 March 2020

A well crafted tearjerker. Congrats on your featured piece..........10++++

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2019

A lovely and poignant poem. I can relate, being no stranger myself to grief and loss. Congrats, Gianfranco, for having your poem chosen as Member POD!

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Thank you, dear. I'm sorry for your grief and loss.

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Kim Barney 04 March 2019

Beautiful poem, Gianfranco. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Thank you, Phil.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 March 2019

'and now that the wrinkles are even deeper because you're gone, the night doesn't scare me anymore' - These lines touched me deep. So sad, yet so beautiful! ! ! To grow old together with a beloved one is a sublime thought, which the poet has elaborated so beautifully in this poem! Loved it really and thought over it, over and over again! Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Thank you, Khairul. I'm glad you liked it.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 March 2019

Nobody's life, long or short, is a cakewalk. We have to bear and traverse through our own trials and tribulations throughout the length of our life. This becomes easier when we have hands of love to hold on to, particularly at the later days of our life. I fully agree with Lorraine Colon that 'It's no fun growing old, but to do it with a loved one is so much easier to bear'.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Yes, it's definetely one more reason to smile to life. Thank you.

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Jennifer Birchall 04 March 2019

A very touching poem, congratulations on POD Gianfranco.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Thank you, Jennifer.

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Carl Roussell 04 March 2019

A moving poem and well written poem. Congratulations on POD!

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Gianfranco Aurilio 05 March 2019

Thank you, Carl.

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Lorraine Colon 04 March 2019

It's no fun growing old, but to do it with a loved one is so much easier to bear. A touching poem from deep within the heart.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 04 March 2019

Yes, this is exactly the message of the poem. Thank you, Lorraine.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2019

So close to the horizon! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 04 March 2019

Thank you, Edward. That one is one of my favourite lines too.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 March 2019

The longing experienced after departure of the loved one- life partner for heavenly abode, in the evening of life has been portrayed in a touching way. Great poem, deserving Poem of the Day.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 04 March 2019

Thank you, Ratnakar.

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 04 March 2019

The night is also no longer scaring me. Nice writing

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Gianfranco Aurilio 04 March 2019

Thank you. The hope to see the loved one once again can be more important than life.

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Bharati Nayak 04 March 2019

I always hoped you would be by my side because I knew that smiling would be easier, that hugs would still be the same difficulties less difficult efforts less tiring suffering more tolerable joys more intense, because I wanted to share every moment of my life with you, - - - - - Wonderful poem about the power of love that takes away our pains and heightens our joy.We wish that love be present in the last days.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 04 March 2019

Yes, it would be wonderful. Thank you.

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