*to Grandpa.....Help Comments

I like your poem.It's a plea from a woman's heart.Heaven will help you and love will find a way. Meanwhile your Grandpa's love sustains you still.

Sometimes we try to reach out and help people understand where they are going wrong..or try to make them see sense before something terrible or just regrettable happens...It's times like you've penned here that we turn to the wise, as they have seen and done many things that will be called upon us at sometime in our lives...We learn by our mistakes, or by the mistakes others have made...The reason behind it....Don't let history be repeated....Wise eyes, wise minds...strong heart....understanding....is a powerful tool...if we use the knowledge wisely......nice work......this piece should not have been marked so low in my opinion.....keep penning, and keep expressing 10