To Give Life Comments

Such a remarkable piece...

your first stanza describes life today as we know it. I perfer he second stanza, a more relaxed, simple life. nice writing Lyn.

Great philosophy Lyn, we are so wrapped up with our possessions and this buy, buy, buy society, that we forget what is really of value and worth having, such as friendship and love.

We fall in a mirage of materialistic, it looks so realistic to hold in our life but it deceive us about what life true is..because it wider than we can see. A nice shot on mind Lyn! _Soul

Hitting! ! ! great message! ! ! yet we don't need a list We just need to know why we really exist lucky people get to know over the years what is the purpose of their existence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Nice poem Lyn, you describe my sister to a 'T' with her i-pad & i-phone & gadgets. I prefer the simpler life where nature can be appreciated.