'' To Forgive Isn't Divine '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' To Forgive Isn't Divine ''



Is this gift called living?
All it's portrayed,
Must you be so forgiving,
Or can you be swayed.

Why forgive what you hate,
To make others feel good?
When you'd rather castrate,
Then totally exclude.

If someone hurts you,
Ask yourself, why?
If they cause you ado,
Why shouldn't you defy.

Only after they're caught,
Do they mimic contrition,
While those left distraught,
Face an inquisition.

While you the victim,
Are left feeling scarred,
The do gooders dictum,
Is their ace card.

I had a hard life,
As an excuse it is lame,
We've all came through strife,
But that we don't blame.

We've all been through Hell,
Most don't turn to crime,
The reason we've done well?
Our mountains we'd climb.

To continually blame others,
Is a form of abuse,
The truth's what it smothers,
It's a feeble excuse.

To that human who errs,
Some say all will be fine,
I'd say, who cares?

‘' To Forgive Isn't Divine ‘'

Friday, May 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The pressure to forgive can have the opposite effect, never be pressured into doing it, the decision to forgive should be yours alone.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 04 May 2018

Great poem Bri. However, don't use a cliched heading it doesn't show originality. In others words, if you wear diamonds don't put a funny hat on.+++10 Robert

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