Tuesday, September 28, 2010

To Forget A Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Infront of my home a tree without leaves
Weak, thin leaveless branches full spread across
Moon glancing behind this in a cracked shape
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Aranthabailu Ummar
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Roseann Shawiak 02 August 2015

Very poignant and quietly intense. Memories are bittersweet, bringing tears to our eyes, yet a smile escapes from time to time. Treasuring our love through each one of them touches our hearts sublimely and silently, yet we feel the sorrow of loss and are unable to share those thoughts and feelings with another. Heartfelt, tender and delicate emotions within your words. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2011

It's like almost a year this write was written, almost a year i was read this poem... Some says, how to forget that smell if you keep the fragrance with you... Forgetting is not easy sometimes, we may forget something very fast but somehow we cant choose what to be forgotten, it beyond control..it's like the more we want to erase the more it stay hard, coz whn we want to remove that we keep memorizing the things..repeating the same scenes...Nice to read it again my old friend_Unwritten Soul

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