Tuesday, July 29, 2008

To Fly Away Comments

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I can't seem to breakaway
I cannot leave this place
I hopefully wait for the day
For my wings to be unchained
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Katherine Sessor
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Reshma Ramesh 06 October 2008

very nice indeed.............

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 August 2008

if i could ever fly beneath your wings, it'd be great.what a write kat.keep it up.

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William Jackson 30 July 2008

I like your poem. It contains elements of mythology and makes me think of a chained unicorn or perhaps a winged being that is bound to the rocks in the same way that Prometheus is said to have been bound as punishment for stealing fire from the gods out of pity for mankind.

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Katherine Sessor

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