Saturday, June 18, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

I come into fear,
My heart is wet with tear,
No one seems to care.
I miss you dear,
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Wong Moli
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lost soul 20 June 2011

i like the way it rhymes. it sounds a little sad

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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