Saturday, January 17, 2009

To Find Hope Has To Be The Scariest Thing, Because I'M Afraid To Lose It, Comments

Rating: 2.5

This pain feels like something's nibbling at my heart,
very slowly
but every second of the day,
It never stops,
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Monique Ornelas
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Sameer Ahmed 22 January 2009

Wow! You have outpoured you heart in words with a very soothing effect.........Your wish will be granted for sure if you remain truthful.......Never lose hope for it will keep you motivated.............. Best Wishes Sameer

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Beautiful heart raking poem, I hope you find that 'someone'. Easily 10

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Monique Ornelas

Monique Ornelas

Bakersfield, California
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