Wednesday, November 4, 2015

To Find And To Be Found Comments

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I left this familiar surroundings and this oh so cold society with the idea of finding myself.
But all I could find was an even colder society - and you.
Whatever this is, it is not what I came for but who would I be to control the future?
In all this time when I had no choice but do nothing else than thinking I yet started finding myself, who I really am and what I truly want.
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Ana Schatzmann
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Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

''Slowly all those questions found an answer, but there still was one left, lost and forgotten in the middle of all these colorful thoughts. What is love? '' Very interesting lines Ana. Thanks for sharing.. __________________________ P: S: Did you forget to capitasise 'i' in the line ''And while i was busy finding an answer ''? ? _____________________________ Anyways, a very nice poem... Welcome to poemhunter... Cheers :)

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