To Feel You In Every Pulse Comments

" Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy" Love turns into an opening blossom. Beautifully described. Thank you.

beautiful and intense expressions of love and passion. When the deepest emotions of love rise one feels it in each and every breath. May you always be blessed with this pure ecestacy of love.

hey, valsa! i've been meaning to visit with your poems and am finally getting round to it. this one is charming and well-written. i hestitated at " brambles of your dark eyes" i suppose because here in the u.s. brambles usually have a negative connotation. but then i thought, ah, yes, one gets caught in, stays in the brambles. good stuff! -glen

main teri pyaari chaal-dhaal main rehna chahti hoon apnay dukh dard mitaanay k liyay, teray mohan k akarshan main aa kar kheenchi aati hoon mohabbat ki kashish main

An excellent poem of love that holds us spellbound. Deeply passionate and heartwarming. Each and every stanza vividly portrays the kind of love that we so envisioned to have in life. Beautifully written with great rhyme and compelling imagery. Onto my Poem List.

Wow! Valsa, this is the most passionate poem I can ever remember from you! I'm not a big fan of love poems, but this one hits me really hard! I will have to put it on my favorites list and give it a ten for sure!

And rock me in happy swings in love's delights MARVELLOUS POEM ONLY GOD GIFTS SOME ONE LIKE YOU MY DEAR POETESS I know god loves me and but yes ah not so much as he loves many like ye one day god will also love me when in heaven to HIM I make a Plea God love me love me love me 1000000000000000000000000000000....> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >

Now soak me in the liquid passion of your heart That impels my spirit to scale new heights Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy And rock me in happy swings in love's delights MARVELLOUS POEM ONLY GOD GIFTS SOME ONE LIKE YOU MY DEAR POETESS I know god loves me and but yes ah not so much as he loves many like ye one day god will also love me when in heaven to HIM I make a Plea God love me love me love me

While love arises body and heart are mesmerized with the fragrance of love. It brings feeling in every breath and pulse. The lover or beloved becomes a love-bitten dove. An exquisite inscription has been made on love having an insightful outlook. Marvelous one.10

'My body warmly snuggled close to you Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove' - lines that I loved most. This imagery I often visualize while thinking of love or a loved someone.

A passionate poem on love and intimacy. I am sure the words will resonate in many a ear. Every line of the poem is an ardent expression of pulsating love that throbs the heart.10/10.

To drown inn the irresistible lure of your magnetism, To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes, my heart That waits to overflow like a river in spate, My body warmly snuggled close to you Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove rock me in happy swings in love's delights. Beautiful lines that will remain in the cradle of poetical delight...10

True feelings of ecstatic love expressed in beautiful lines. Thank you for sharing a lovely poem.

This is so passionately written! Expressions like " a river in spate" and " brambles of your dark eyes" elevate the poeticism entailed in this piece, though I'd like to confirm if " brambles" herein refer to the iris or the dark furcations (not the dental term) that sometimes canvas the white part of the eye.

Very interesting love poem. Each stanza is a gem and makes one think about him/her lover. Enjoyed very much.

Passions gyrate like the whirl in my heart and overflow like a river in spate.The cuckoo has become romantic!

My body warmly snuggled close to you / Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove- - - - -> WoW! ! ! ! ! That sings of passion! ! ! Extremely well done dear Valsa! 10++++++++++