I have read so much of Pablo Neruda,
Eaten so much of Antonio Jacinto,
Still to walk up to you, drains me red,
Your moonlit flecks and walk,
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your intent is well crafted, but something is not that clear to me are you already in love with the girl, or you are planning to be but have no confidence to approach the girl auntil she's been taking by another man
Been madly in love and same time not having the courage to tell her of your love till she is taken away. It can be very devastating. Beautiful. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and do leave your comments
In love but scared to talk...now she's gone far