Wednesday, October 30, 2019

To Fatima From A Vincible Heart Comments

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I have read so much of Pablo Neruda,
Eaten so much of Antonio Jacinto,
Still to walk up to you, drains me red,
Your moonlit flecks and walk,
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Kareem Azeez
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Kareem Azeez 01 November 2019

In love but scared to talk...now she's gone far

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Chiori Mathew 31 October 2019

your intent is well crafted, but something is not that clear to me are you already in love with the girl, or you are planning to be but have no confidence to approach the girl auntil she's been taking by another man

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Kingsley Egbukole 31 October 2019

Been madly in love and same time not having the courage to tell her of your love till she is taken away. It can be very devastating. Beautiful. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and do leave your comments

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Kareem Azeez

Kareem Azeez

Lagos Nigeria
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