Life seems old
And falling
Which hand's there
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Profound philosophical rendition very powerfully penned with lucidity of thought. A work of an intricate mind.... Thanks for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Stay blessed.
Marvelous verses and images woven to paint how we go through life imbued with the beauty and wonders of Mother Nature. To my Poem List.
A moving and beautiful portrayal on the stages of life. Wonderful
Revisiting ma'am. The understanding from an infant's perspective...as she/ he looks the natursl principle of regulations or continuity of life. Beautiful ma'am. Name is apt. Into my favourite. Verify inspirational.
A nascent leaf Fluttering In gentle breeze Flickering In golden sunshine In the lap of mother nature Excites me......captivating poetic expression! HNY 2021 to you and your beloved family dear madam. Stay always happy and blessed!
'Waiting/Like the fallen/Leaves with the/withered look/To be swept up by/A monsoon blow For a new season'...... Indeed we, the people, at the threshold of old age is waiting to be lifted up by supportive hands to welcome a new season of hope and joy just as a fallen leaf waits to be lifted by a monsoon blow of wind....! Beautiful analogy!
Waiting Like the fallen Leaves with the withered look This is exactly how we all feel and look in this testing period. No other way but to wait and watch with patience. Thank you Ma'm for this vivid portrayal of life through your beautiful poem........Hope we all rise..........5 Stars
as we the part of nature always face the day and night where as the day comes to greet another night and night comes to greet next day; winter goes to greet the spring, spring goes to greet summer, green leaf becomes yellow to withered to greet another new green leaf, the old dies to give place the every new, so we fall one time to rise another time
So that A nascent leaf Fluttering In gentle breeze Flickering In golden sunshine In the lap of mother nature Excites me........beautifully delineated the scene of natural life;
Ma'am autumn so metaphorical compared with child in the lap kicking gently. Very beautiful conception and expression of surprise. Thank-you.
What a fantastic description of a life sketch you have made through the nature, Amusing 10**** Indeed we all are tiny kids in front of mother nature.
Yes madam, to fall means to rise. In old age people need to rise with the help of their grandsons or grand daughters. After final falling a person gets nascent body like a new leaf of a tree. A well imaginative poem with a philosophical base has been composed by you incisively. Full five stars.
Sort of a beautiful philosophical write about the life. Very beautifully crafted. 'To be swept up by A monsoon blow For a new season'.. is so nice. Thanks for sharing.
A motivational piece of work dear madam! Brilliantly composed..5 🌟
Glorious piece..... thanks for sharing.....