Monday, September 14, 2009

To Fade Away Comments

Rating: 4.8

I want to melt away into nothing,
To be a simple molecule of air,
Floating in and out of people' lives,
Without them even knowing.
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Bethany Maxwell
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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2017

Bethany, as much as I liked your Poem Of The Day, I like this one even better. Beautiful vivid imagery. So many great lines. Profound poetry. Since you mentioned music in your bio, you might like my poems: Resurrection; Closing Time (For Leonard Cohen) and Party Hearty. They are all being transformed into songs. Please let me know what you think. Thank you.

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Dislocated Heart 30 October 2009

absolutely an amazing.. and beautiful poem..... 10++ I love it...

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Anna jonson 24 September 2009

if i could.. i would have voted one million times.......... I want to make my own mistakes and correct them myself, Without you trying to do it for me trueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........ beautiful...................... so true deep down inside waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw

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BEAU GOLDEN 14 September 2009

Air breathed by the sycamore and water dumped from the heavens, i really enjoyed this and the symbolism and visual imagery. Great work. Did u ever hear the song Truly, Madly, deeply? Your poem makes me want to listen to it now.

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Bryan Alexander 14 September 2009

simply beautiful.......

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Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
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