I want to melt away into nothing,
To be a simple molecule of air,
Floating in and out of people' lives,
Without them even knowing.
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absolutely an amazing.. and beautiful poem..... 10++ I love it...
if i could.. i would have voted one million times.......... I want to make my own mistakes and correct them myself, Without you trying to do it for me trueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........ beautiful...................... so true deep down inside waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
Air breathed by the sycamore and water dumped from the heavens, i really enjoyed this and the symbolism and visual imagery. Great work. Did u ever hear the song Truly, Madly, deeply? Your poem makes me want to listen to it now.
Bethany, as much as I liked your Poem Of The Day, I like this one even better. Beautiful vivid imagery. So many great lines. Profound poetry. Since you mentioned music in your bio, you might like my poems: Resurrection; Closing Time (For Leonard Cohen) and Party Hearty. They are all being transformed into songs. Please let me know what you think. Thank you.