Satan and Adam
Sinner
Struggle
Guiltiness, the consequence
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short and to the point.......in the face........well penned
This is so clever. I agree, life seems so wonderful and carefree when we are young, then suddenly someone pressed the 'fast forward' button. We realise what we have always suspected, there is a bill to pay at the end...
So beautiful poem. Really I enjoyed those nicest words and expressions.
A capturing poem an' thought provoking my friend! Thanks for sharing! Best regards, 10 Friend Thad
Many would think of the same matter as this poem.. You've done a great job bringing it with feeling and thought.. Great..
What is right and what is wrong? And when do we stop forgiving, A very thought provoking piece Nightingale, well written, 10 Lynda xx
Fascinating, enigmatic. Perhaps, each person must answer these questions for himself. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
Yes, the Satan a guilty angel too, all the same it will be good if you do not identify Eve to them... Very cleverly and mysteriously! 10... Tsira
very unique but i like that about it.. Great work Krista
a nice poem though i don`t agree with it completely.anyway, i think it depends on adam ''the man'' some can prevail and others lose.
well its a different poem with a different subject. nice.
Guiltiness, the consequence Which one is the winner? a great question unanswered so far, nay even unquestioned. a deep view. i bow you
Humanity, flawed and lovely all in the same breathe