Monday, November 24, 2008

To Err Is Angel Comments

Rating: 4.9

Satan and Adam
Sinner
Struggle
Guiltiness, the consequence
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Amber Lamb 02 December 2008

Humanity, flawed and lovely all in the same breathe

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

short and to the point.......in the face........well penned

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Norma Southwood 28 November 2008

This is so clever. I agree, life seems so wonderful and carefree when we are young, then suddenly someone pressed the 'fast forward' button. We realise what we have always suspected, there is a bill to pay at the end...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 November 2008

So beautiful poem. Really I enjoyed those nicest words and expressions.

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Thad Wilk 28 November 2008

A capturing poem an' thought provoking my friend! Thanks for sharing! Best regards, 10 Friend Thad

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Kite Remedy 27 November 2008

Many would think of the same matter as this poem.. You've done a great job bringing it with feeling and thought.. Great..

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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

wonderful piece of work thanks for sharing

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Lynda Robson 25 November 2008

What is right and what is wrong? And when do we stop forgiving, A very thought provoking piece Nightingale, well written, 10 Lynda xx

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Sandra Fowler 25 November 2008

Fascinating, enigmatic. Perhaps, each person must answer these questions for himself. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow a cleverly drafted one ++10 regards anju

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Ency Bearis 25 November 2008

great essence...a clever write..well done..A 10 Ency Bearis

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Tsira Goge 25 November 2008

Yes, the Satan a guilty angel too, all the same it will be good if you do not identify Eve to them... Very cleverly and mysteriously! 10... Tsira

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very unique but i like that about it.. Great work Krista

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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

a nice poem though i don`t agree with it completely.anyway, i think it depends on adam ''the man'' some can prevail and others lose.

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Seema Chowdhury 24 November 2008

well its a different poem with a different subject. nice.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 November 2008

Nice one.............!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 November 2008

Guiltiness, the consequence Which one is the winner? a great question unanswered so far, nay even unquestioned. a deep view. i bow you

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

said the truth......fine! ....10+

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