To Err Is Angel Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

To Err Is Angel

Rating: 4.9


Satan and Adam
Sinner
Struggle
Guiltiness, the consequence
Who is the winner?

Ethereal melodies of life
For a while
Then a bang
End of the trial

Help people
Release your soul
Who will blame you?
Parole

(2008/11/24)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kite Remedy 27 November 2008

Many would think of the same matter as this poem.. You've done a great job bringing it with feeling and thought.. Great..

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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

wonderful piece of work thanks for sharing

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Lynda Robson 25 November 2008

What is right and what is wrong? And when do we stop forgiving, A very thought provoking piece Nightingale, well written, 10 Lynda xx

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Sandra Fowler 25 November 2008

Fascinating, enigmatic. Perhaps, each person must answer these questions for himself. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow a cleverly drafted one ++10 regards anju

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Amber Lamb 02 December 2008

Humanity, flawed and lovely all in the same breathe

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

short and to the point.......in the face........well penned

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Norma Southwood 28 November 2008

This is so clever. I agree, life seems so wonderful and carefree when we are young, then suddenly someone pressed the 'fast forward' button. We realise what we have always suspected, there is a bill to pay at the end...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 November 2008

So beautiful poem. Really I enjoyed those nicest words and expressions.

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Thad Wilk 28 November 2008

A capturing poem an' thought provoking my friend! Thanks for sharing! Best regards, 10 Friend Thad

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