Satan and Adam
Sinner
Struggle
Guiltiness, the consequence
Who is the winner?
Ethereal melodies of life
For a while
Then a bang
End of the trial
Help people
Release your soul
Who will blame you?
Parole
(2008/11/24)
What is right and what is wrong? And when do we stop forgiving, A very thought provoking piece Nightingale, well written, 10 Lynda xx
Fascinating, enigmatic. Perhaps, each person must answer these questions for himself. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
short and to the point.......in the face........well penned
This is so clever. I agree, life seems so wonderful and carefree when we are young, then suddenly someone pressed the 'fast forward' button. We realise what we have always suspected, there is a bill to pay at the end...
So beautiful poem. Really I enjoyed those nicest words and expressions.
A capturing poem an' thought provoking my friend! Thanks for sharing! Best regards, 10 Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Many would think of the same matter as this poem.. You've done a great job bringing it with feeling and thought.. Great..